It Never Rang But In My Dreams

[Demetrius Hy'rona]

Well I felt left out!!! So I decided to take a poem I wrote and place it in here This one is pretty straight forward. I usually am a metaphorical kinda writer O.o but my metaphorical piece is loooong so figured you might not want that posted i dunno. anyways, here it is. How I feel when I really like someone

---It Never Rang But In My Dreams---

Laying there, waiting for the phone to ring
Not expecting, but wishing.
Time flies by, the quiet ticking echoing in the house
My eye lids fall heavy,
I cant seem to open them,
But nor do i notice,
Or even care.
I continue to lay there,
Eyes shut, hands laying over my stomach
Phone in my gentle grasp.
Nothing seems to matter at that point,
Except to hear your voice.
I fall into blackness,
Wishing,
Dreaming i listened to your voice,
That angelic voice
That soothes my soul
And feels as if it completes the song of my life.
I awake
Hours later
To the rise of the awakening sun.
As i open my sleepy eyes lazily,
I think to myself,
"Wow, that was one of the best sleeps i've ever had"
And it was all thanks to you,
My angel.


-Demetrius Hy'rona

P.S. This is just a rough draft I wrote tonight. havent been through it yet, and I would appreciate any feedback criticism only makes a writer better at his work.

[Kor'inth Hy'rona]

aww Dem... telemarketers stop callin?? hehe it's good tho, keep up the good work!

[Sahara]

Dem, I feel that that was sooo good, please keep writing and using your imagination, I enjoyed reading that, just try to use some words that ryme in your poem writing, doesn't have to ryme all through it, but just a few words to use in your poems, but otherwise, great job!! Lady Sahara Hy'rona

[Sahara]

A Dream Within A Dream
Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow--
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.

I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
Grains of the golden sand--
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep--while I weep!
O God! can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
O God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?

Just thought you might like this Lady Sahara Hy'rona

[Sahara]

Sharing Words
People come People go
Making and impression, you can't let go,
Hearing their voice, in the wisper of the wind,
Making you smile, that will never end...
Taking the time, to be so kind,
Will carry you far, till the end of time.
Lady Sahara Hy'rona

[Lursa the Orc]

Thank you Demetrius and Sahara for all of the poetry you share with us. It was nice to se Demetrius throw his hat into the poetry ring. I enjoy your work both of you. You have both been very kind and made the server a better place to be!