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Post by Sahara on Aug 27, 2004 17:46:12 GMT -5
I am a rose, you are my thorns, clutching to me, protecting me. I am the sun, you are my rays, helping me to shine and to be all that I can. I am a lake, you are my water, filling me with ideas, dreams, and hopes for the future. I am a tree, you are my leaves, sharing who and what I am and becoming an important part of my life. I am a heart, you are my beat, beating rhythmically to my happiness, my fear, my sadness, my excitement. I am me and you are with me, to share all that I am, to share life, love, and happiness.
Always. Lady Sahara Hy'rona
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Post by AnubisHyrona on Aug 28, 2004 10:50:07 GMT -5
very beautiful, and very well written.
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Post by Sahara on Aug 28, 2004 13:00:02 GMT -5
Thank You so much Anubis! I appriciate your responce, I feel poems, jokes, etc. are very uplifting to read and puts a on people's face's, so I would love to add a poem or joke on a daily basis if people would like that, mabey I could get more feedback on this. Thank You Again, Lady Sahara Hy'rona
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Post by Demetrius Hy'rona on Aug 28, 2004 14:31:55 GMT -5
i loved reading it. i like it a lot. good job on the writing sahara. you did well it is beautiful Demetrius Hy'rona
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Post by Mabalata on Aug 29, 2004 4:58:16 GMT -5
It is as beautiful as you M'lady *wipes tears aways*
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Post by Blackstone on Aug 29, 2004 9:51:31 GMT -5
Very Nice Sahara
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Post by Niobe RaiyneHawk on Aug 29, 2004 13:32:44 GMT -5
Absolutely breathtaking Sahara! Tis a rare gift, to be able to weave words into such a graceful and heart-touching tapestry of emotions. I would love to read more, should you decide to share it *Smiles softly* With the Utmost Sincerity, Niobe Raiyne-Hawk
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Post by Sahara on Aug 30, 2004 4:28:21 GMT -5
Thank You so much for your feedback, if these make your day better, mine is better too I'd like to be the sort of friend that you have been to me; I'd like to be the help that you've been always glad to be; I'd like to mean as much to you each minute of the day As you have meant, old friend of mine, to me along the way. I'd like to do the big things and the splendid things for you, To brush the gray from out your skies and leave them only blue; I'd like to say the kindly things that I so oft have heard, And feel that I could rouse your soul the way that mine you've stirred. I'd like to give you back the joy that you have given me, Yet that were wishing you a need I hope will never be; I'd like to make you feel as rich as I, who travel on Undaunted in the darkest hours with you to lean upon. I'm wishing at this time that I could but repay A portion of the gladness that you've strewn along my way; And could I have one wish this year, this only would it be: I'd like to be the sort of friend that you have been to me. Lady Sahara Hy'rona
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Post by Hera on Aug 30, 2004 6:45:51 GMT -5
Very nicely done. Maybe I shall venture without dealing any fatefull blows today... then again.... maybe.... hehehe
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Post by AnubisHyrona on Aug 30, 2004 16:53:54 GMT -5
good rythme, and a good poetic sense. Good use of literary license as well.
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